They’re Coming…

I normally use Al’s fiction prompt for one of my serials of flash fiction but this week is slightly different.

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Photography by Al Forbes


The dark nights had started closing in tighter and tighter. Winter was but a stone’s throw away. The air tasted of fear and anticipation. I knew they were coming and there was nothing I could do about it.

Each time the door rattled to the thump of the brass knocker I could taste the fear on my tongue. I’d answer the door and it wouldn’t be them instead a cold caller desperately trying to flog double glazing stood on my doorstep.

I wished they’d just come, get it over with.

The calendar seemed to glow on the date – today was the day. No chance of escaping it. Their paraphernalia was in every shop window like a warning sign. As the sunset the street took on a deathly silence. A cold wind left its chill on the crushed autumn leaves. And the whispers of smoke from the chimney stacks seemed hauntingly still before fading to nothing. I knew they were coming.

‘RAP, RAP! The old brass knocker slammed into the wooden door. My heart pounding I turned the key. RAP! RAP! RAP! They were not prepared to wait any longer as I opened the door to their evil wails and screams –

‘Trick or Treat!’


© JG Farmer 2014

About Jez Farmer

I am a freelance writer and poet and started writing after raising my two boys as a way of discovering just who Jez is. That is still very much an on-going project but the journey so far has introduced me to many wonderful friends and fellow writers through an ever growing love of poetry.
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4 Responses to They’re Coming…

  1. Al says:

    Hahaha brilliant 😀

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